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I didn't see this the first time around, so I spent a couple of hours catching up on it last night. (The pages turn quickly!)

It is clear that the rabbits are the focus of this work; we learn a fair amount about their society, culture, and daily life. The humans, by and large, felt rather one-dimensional, and some seemed mere vessels for opinions on society — though Sammy was a more complex character. Later exposition (particularly the computer scene) seemed a little heavy-handed. I felt ill by the end due to the violence; the conclusion is not all roses, but more positive than I expected given preceding events.

These are all nitpicks for what's both good furry literature, with a nice contrast to Phil's Lapism stories, and a good read. Worth your time.

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