Outside of the factual problems, your writing is horrible. I'm not trying to be mean or anything I'm just offering an honest assessment. I don't know how old you are, so maybe you just haven't had enough practice, but seriously. Work on your writing.
Outside of the factual problems, your writing is horrible. I'm not trying to be mean or anything I'm just offering an honest assessment. I don't know how old you are, so maybe you just haven't had enough practice, but seriously. Work on your writing.